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When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

I can feel the pain
Beating through my veins
The rhythm pulsing
Burning, searing pain
Life soon to stop
A sudden end

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

Can you see my agony
My fear of falling
My short life
All in wain!
All because of this needless pain!
I have to leave you soon
My strength do have an end!
My dearest friend

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

A hidden defect
A hidden pain
My heart beating
TO FAST!
SOON TO END!
Can you see my fear of falling
Dont try to catch me
It`s useless my friend

The rhythm so wild
No drum can follow
The beat so crazy
My mind so hollow
The pain finally coming to an end
Please do not cry for me
I will see you on the borderline
My dearest friend
So do not cry for me
I`ll see you again

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down

When your heart throws a beat
You cant understand
Your life is suddenly
Uppside down



Inspired by Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan and my own heart defect.... R.I.P Jimmy, thank you for giving me the strength to carry on!
lyrics inspired by Jimmy "The Rev" Sullivan and my own Deceitful Heart... Thank you Jimmy, for giving me the strength to carry on!
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VictorSeven Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the realistic hearts, are so great :D
and, also, I don't know so much of english, but I think the poem is perfect to me :3
In my language, I say that es más precioso, que el canto del alba, cuando aún todos duermen, les vela en dulce muerte, del día anterior.
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Nuclear000Rainbow Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you! nuestra Tal vez debería darte las gracias en su idioma... dont know if this is written the right way thought... :)
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VictorSeven Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student General Artist
Hahahaha, so cute ^^
don't worry 'bout the language, it's ok ^^
Cheers to you :3
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blackstormwarrior Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
Beautiful poem... and the heart looks like a chicken to me...
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Nuclear000Rainbow Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! ^^
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anthonylino Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Beautiful work..
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Nuclear000Rainbow Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks! :D
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Ricky311 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Magnificent.
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Nuclear000Rainbow Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you... :)
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Ricky311 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem.
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